Contest Entry - Eternals Online

This is my 2nd video, as the first one seems too long.. Hopefully this one is better then the previous one, it's way shorter but i tried putting as much important stuffs as possible..




Old video link (https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ToZ97Sl0nbw)

Pros and cons:

(Don't take offense, just giving you my opinion)

Pros:

-Good content (although not complete) and shows the most amount of PK out of all the videos I've seen
-Presented the Argent Tour in 1 continuous shot, which makes it easy to understand the video (although has a con)
-Like how you used 2 songs

Cons:

-I dislike the first song you used, was non-fitting and felt out of place.
-Video could be shorter if you edit some of the walking out in the video
-Also, PK scene was a tad too long, which also makes the video long
-You showed the NPC's but didn't show the contents of most of the NPC's.
-Presentation and choice of font is plain
-No DW/FC/DA/AA/BD


You can definitely make the video better and I wish you good luck =)

thanks for the reply and feedback.. maybe i'll try changing the song (which genre? i might change it to another instrumental song), and cut out some pk scene to make it shorter..

For the font and effect i'll try my best to edit it..

The reason why i didnt include DA/AA/DW/BD/FC is because i did not have a guild which is active on the maze/bossing, which makes me almost impossible to join an existing party (i tried several times already)

Updated, i uploaded the second video. Need your feedback pls!

Thx for the feedback, Jo

Oh wow I didn't realize you did a 2nd take o_o

And omg you improved it dramatically! Too much to write lol I'll just say, it's awesome!

If I was to nitpick and comment on cons, I would say that some parts such as the Legend presentation and maybe some NPC's were a bit rushed into showing what they really are.. but I can understand why.

Other than that, overall, I love it ^^

Good luck Vintovka~

Thanks for the feedback This 2nd video wouldn't have existed if you hadn't commented lol.. anyway although the npc presentation are a bit rush, hopefully it's not a real problem as most of the important npcs are in argent

Ya overall it's fine ^^

Wish you good luck!

Oh yea and thanks for using me for the Legend lol xD

the sound not so good and u show npc with short time. i cant event see the npc name. but u already try the best