Contest Video entry (take two)

so in this video i added some more stuff, trimmed, rearranged some stuff to better suit the music etc. the editing probably couldve been better but i wanted to finish it before i went to sleep XD and its 2:20am now XD

again suggestions are welcome



oh and idk even know how i uploaded it as a 1080 version the first time lol and idk if it is this time either XD

also if anyone thinks that making a video is too hard, it not! this was my first time ever making a video and i think it turned out pretty good. all you need is a program to record like hypercam and another to make your movie like windows movie maker or adobe.

lol ya it's not hard but if you're really really ambitious, then it becomes hard =_=

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Anyway a rundown of pros and cons for you ^^

Pros:

-Presentation is awesome!
-Nice choice of words and font type
-Great music
-Great shots of the event Chris hosted
-Really good ending

Cons:

-Transitions aren't smooth in some parts.
-Adding small descriptive text next to each scene would've been nice (ex. Portal to _____, etc.)
-No DW Bossing
-No DA/AA Tour

Hope you win =)

You did add all the content that i asked for and it is much appreciated but what i didn't like in this video this time is as the player above me mentioned, there was no explanation of which port you were entering followed by what looked like fabricated dull PK the fact that it was fabricated doesn't bother me but it was visually noticeable, if you had made an active quick pk scene it would have fit in nicely. Also if you had a party with you when your are going to slay a boss would give viewers the impression that your not the only player that does bossing also shows team work in the server. If you can improve the video again by all means do we still have one more entry so until then no final verdict will be made. 4 stars

kk thx to all. i will improve it again cuz by now im like i have to win this ahahaah